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that's a mad awesome pose. nice attitude and a great 'drape' on the clothes. i like the tattered headband :3 really sexy but remember the whole body details. like-oh shoot is it his right hand (yeah i'm retarded that way) well look at the bandages. the strips on the palms should be mostly horizontal but it looks as if two of the finger lines come all the way down to the wrist. basically cutting his hand in half. and unless there was some detail like a kneecap it isn't sure whether the legs on his shorts are supposed to be uneven.
again. i can't remember your characters or the clothes. just saying